Daquan Adams
Identity Crisis
. What are these factors that make up an identity? How
important is an identity is to someone? Identity is what we as people use to
identify ourselves as unique and different from other people. Identity is made
of many small factors that combine to make the overall person that people
identify you as. I am proud to have my own identity that no one can copy.
Whether it be my race and personality and the way I see people. I am me and
only I can be me, no one else can be the person that I am.
Personality is a big part of what makes up an identity. Mainly
because your personality is what you act like and what you show so that people
can identify you. My personality is that I always want people to smile and
laugh when they are around me. All my friends call me a big teddy bear because
I never want to see them sad. That being my personality is how they see me, how
they identify as. My identity of how people see me is made up of my
personality. I have a personality that is all my own, making my identity unique
and special in many different ways.
Identity is an important in life in many ways. It is what
makes us who we are, and what we are. My identity is the connection to my race
and the way I want people to see me. I love to make my friends laugh and make
them happy. That is how they see me as, my identity to them as the teddy bear.
Identity is unique and special to everyone. We all have multiple factors that
make up our identity as a whole. I’m proud that I am me and no one else can be
me.
Work
cited
James McBride, “Hip Hop
Planet”. National Geographic Magazine. April 2007, © 2015 National Geographic
Society. All rights reserved.
Good evening Daquan:
ReplyDeleteI read your blog and while it looks aesthically good and has some wonderful sentences, "proud of being black," and all the various examples, but what I need you to do is show how all of these identities relate to one another. What common theme do they all share? Why are they important? What do you want your reader to know after he/she finishes it? What defines you? What makes you, you?
I'd like for you to answer these questions as it will help you clarify your main point.
Do my comments make sense? Please respond with your understanding.